Wednesday, March 21, 2012

More than Loved

When you pass down the lane
They all turn around and look at you the same
Watching the beautiful sunlight shimmer through you hair
And I can not blame them

You are like a gentle flower that flows with the wind
I can see how the breeze loves to accompany you
and the bright sun shines and tries to make a shadow of yours like never before seen.

The way you move your eyes
A sweet pain passes through my heart,
Every time your feet touches the ground
I can feel the ground smiling in a disguise perfected to art

You are not something ordinary
nor are you angel-like,
Calling you an angel would be lie
because you are something more than just a heavenly delight.

Your eyes are deeper than any ocean,
Yet the reflection of skies can be clearly seen
I never believed in miracles
but now i have faith in the things unseen.

The small directions your hair sways
my heart seems to dance that way,
Whenever you pass by
the air fills up with a mesmerizing scent
It's like letters from heaven which were never sent.

I do not like them,
The ones who gets to be part of you everyday,
From the sun, to wind, to the rain touching your face.
You are on the moon while i stand on earth
if you come just a little close
I will show you what you are worth.

When the sun gets too bright to bear
I will gently come close to you
and blow some cool air,
When the rain is falling too hard
I will pull you under a shelter,
A lot of men will take you under their umbrella
but I will be the one to stand with you in the rain.
I cannot move the ground when it gets hard on your feet,
But i will be the one to stay up all night to take care of 'em
and gently kiss you on the forehead before you go to sleep.
I cannot be there in your bad dreams
but i will certainly be beside when you have one,
Because now i know what love actually does,
and all i know now is to make you feel more than loved.


  1. This was beautiful Zain! :)
    The descriptions that you put, it's all so easy to visualize. Your words just flow :)
    Glad you finally posted!

    1. Thank You Philo.
      It's been a while since i wrote something.I somehow feel this is not good but the fact that i have written something is in itself a good feeling.
      Plus the readers liking it, A bonus :D

    2. When we write after a very long gap, we do get such a feeling. I felt the same about my writing :)

  2. Hi, nice to hear from you after a long gap.:) I love the last two lines,:) keep sharing more xain..:) your poem are very inspiring..:)

  3. A nice read....Though after a long time...Loved it as always...:)Keep Writing...:)

  4. heyy a beautiful sweet one :) loved it its like a slide show of images... keep writting:)

  5. I can see her beauty through your words....Beautifully penned :)

  6. Beautifully written.. The word flow is immaculate and you paint a lovely picture for the reader through your words !

  7. Hey zain, i like ur poetry very much,, and i need ur help.. Am going through my interviews and when asked about blogging, and fav blogger , i told them ur name, bcoz i like your way of writing,, but when they ask what u like the most, i said he writes too well , but will u help to frame the answer, what is ur USP and specialty in writing, what makes u write so deep.

    1. Well Ruchi,
      honestly i do not know what i like about writing.But i try and paint down my imagination which is like a potter who makes a pot from a clay.You can give such reference saying you always have to start from scratch to get to top but keep going till you achieve it.Turn your dreams into reality, and i try and keep my words as simple as possible so that it could reach even common peoples mind and they can understand the meaning of poetry and how cool it is.

      I hope this helps.
      Best of luck :)

    2. Xain, hmm its cool , what answer i made is,
      He write so simple and expressive that everything comes alive on page,, everything starts becoming visible and we can actually see it.