Here we are
in this secret place
The world seems so far away
Wrapped around in love's warm embrace.
Holding your hand and i am trying to look at you
But my eyes just don't seem to meet yours ,
Because i find it amazingly beautiful
The clear moonlight from the gray skies
are reflecting in your eyes,
Your hair shimmers gently with wind
You are driving me so wild.
I am trying to be strong
Thinking of not meeting those soft lips
Don't get me wrong
Just want to seal my love with one kiss.
You are the picture perfect girl
The one of whom i thought of every night,
I cannot buy you diamonds and pearls
But being with you just feels so right.
I want to give you everything you ever wanted
I promise you will wake up everyday with a rose on your bed
I will whisper all that you need to hear
I will do things for you no one ever has done or said.
Will carry you to bed every night
Lie with you down beside till you close your eyes,
Wrap you in my arms
and turn off the lights.
Even when we grow old
i will wake you up with a kiss every sunrise,
Whenever you feel cold
I will cover you with a blanket every night.
We will dance in rain and snow
Will live every moment
Like there is no tomorrow.
I will never take you for granted
Will love you in every little way you wanted
Never let a tear fall from your face
Will be right next to you forever and always.
I will let the world know that you are the prettiest thing i have ever seen
And YOU are My Queen.
in this secret place
The world seems so far away
Wrapped around in love's warm embrace.
Holding your hand and i am trying to look at you
But my eyes just don't seem to meet yours ,
Because i find it amazingly beautiful
The clear moonlight from the gray skies
are reflecting in your eyes,
Your hair shimmers gently with wind
You are driving me so wild.
I am trying to be strong
Thinking of not meeting those soft lips
Don't get me wrong
Just want to seal my love with one kiss.
You are the picture perfect girl
The one of whom i thought of every night,
I cannot buy you diamonds and pearls
But being with you just feels so right.
I want to give you everything you ever wanted
I promise you will wake up everyday with a rose on your bed
I will whisper all that you need to hear
I will do things for you no one ever has done or said.
Will carry you to bed every night
Lie with you down beside till you close your eyes,
Wrap you in my arms
and turn off the lights.
Even when we grow old
i will wake you up with a kiss every sunrise,
Whenever you feel cold
I will cover you with a blanket every night.
We will dance in rain and snow
Will live every moment
Like there is no tomorrow.
I will never take you for granted
Will love you in every little way you wanted
Never let a tear fall from your face
Will be right next to you forever and always.
I will let the world know that you are the prettiest thing i have ever seen
And YOU are My Queen.
Awesome, you know, whatever u wrote, every girl expects the same from a boy, thats why am so happy to read that u know, what a girl likes..:)
ReplyDeleteThat is what some guys aim for :)
DeleteIt's romantic all right. It's something every girl wishes for. Beautifully written, despite the fact that most of it doesn't come true even with all the efforts.
ReplyDeleteWell it's the choices you make, i have seen people have this common tendency to fall for people who don't like em at all and this is what ruins most of the story.
DeleteIt's better to be with a person who loves you than a person you love :)
Every girl wants to be treated like a princess :) You jumped to treating like a 'Queen' :D
ReplyDeleteI smiled all the way till the end while reading :)
Well princess before and queen after
DeleteBecause princess when just a guy's girl
but queen when a guy's wife :)
THANK YOU
You're a sweetheart :P
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ReplyDeleteXain,u have very nicely depicted the feelings of a boy in Love...He always want his girl to be an angel for him...very nicely written...loved it...:):)
ReplyDeleteThank You br!nDle :)
DeleteGlad you liked it
and thank you for taking out some precious time to read my work.
Means Alot :)
You write awesomely like always :) Masha'allah.
ReplyDeleteYou never failed our heart in reading you piece..Thanks a lot for inspiring us again! :) I like it much! :)
ReplyDeleteI am glad that you like my work.
DeleteMeans a lot :)
This one is so lovely Xain.. Lucky is the girl if she gets so much of love from her guy.. U made me fantasize about my imaginary Prince Charming doing all these things for me :) Keep Writing :)
ReplyDeleteThank You Miss :)
DeleteWell a girl deserves to be treated like a Queen. That is what i feel :)
Beautiful as always. Dude, she's one lucky girl =)
ReplyDeleteThank You Areesha.
DeleteIt's just an imaginary work, there ain't no girl :)
I read it once, and now I can't get myself to stop reading this beautiful poem.
ReplyDeleteGuess that's a sign of good poetry, when you don't want to stop yourself from reading it. :)
Do I still have to say, Awesome Work? : )
THANK YOU FOR THIS WONDERFUL REVIEW of my Work.
DeleteTHANK YOU :)
There is no girl so there ain't no lucky one.
But still thank you :)
Not to forget, your picture perfect girl seems to be really lucky! :)
ReplyDeleteMy Pleasure. :)
ReplyDeleteThe one who WILL be, is the lucky one, then!:D :)
A guy like that is a dream of every girl and i hope you find that lucky girl holding such a dream to be fulfilled. Very intense and a passionate poetry, loved it!
ReplyDeleteI have one question. Is she yours yet or not?
ReplyDeleteShe has got to be insane-no offense-to not be yours after reading this.
Just asking, cause the girl I love doesn't know if she loves me even though I write poetry..similar to yours.
Even i do not know who is it ?
DeleteNo girl yet so far :)
Well let her know then brother.
There is no point in keeping it to yourself.If you see a future with her then GO FOR IT :)