Wednesday, January 18, 2012

Fading Winter

Standing by this cold river
watching the leaves gently wither away
The beautiful memories seems to turn bitter
and with every passing second i seem to forget your face.

Everything is the same
The same beautiful cold moonlit night
The same silent empty lanes,
The same cold breeze gently flows through my hair
but my lips are forgetting your name.

Once these lanes heard my distant laughter
Once the light brightly fell on my smile
Brighter were the morning after
When i woke up listening to your voice,
Everything is the same,
Just me with a lost smile and your voice
Fading away.

These winds seems to have come from your direction

Touching my closed eyes,
Your face is slowly painted in my imagination
The picture is not clear but enough to make me smile.

It was not your mistake
It wasn't mine
What i felt you didn't
But i still wonder why ?
Everything is the same
But something is missing
These roads wind up back to my place
but the absence of what is missing has changed everything.

I gently lay my head down on my pillow
With your left memories bringing me some peace,
Like it's resting right beside me making me fall asleep,
while my eyes meets it's ends
I hear the thoughts of you and imagination fade away,
In an envelope of dreams away from one another
I am glad it is going away like the fading winter.


15 comments:

  1. This is so sweet .. I love eading it again and again, thanks for this wonderful poetry you've shared.:) Blessed day/evening to you! :) Smile :)

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    1. Sagittarian - Thank you for all the support :)

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  2. Neatly written and lovely flow :)
    Do visit my blog : http://poetrymyfeelings.blogspot.com

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    1. Glad you liked it :)
      I sure will :)
      Thank You !

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  3. Beautifully written. It's so imaginative and your words create a vivid picture. Nice read. :)

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    1. Thank You :)
      That is how i write, by imagining <3

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  4. " It was not your mistake
    It wasn't mine
    What i felt you didn't
    But i still wonder why ?
    Everything is the same
    But something is missing
    These roads wind up back to my place
    but the absence of what is missing has changed everything. "

    BEST LINES <3
    This is beautiful! I could actually imagine and feel each line. I loved this!

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    1. Thank You :)
      Thank you for motivating me to keep writing.Means a lot, i am glad i made my to Blogspot :)

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  5. Sleeping to someone's memories..
    It's so easy to relate to. Sometimes, we just have to let go, right?
    Lovely as always :) I love the rhyming scheme you add :)

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    1. Ahaan :)
      Dreams we hardly remember but it's tough to forget when it's a past :)

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  6. Like I said before, this is so beautiful. Masha'allah. Keep up the good work man!! :D

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  7. Awww...this poem is wonderful!!!
    You write soooo well! I loved it!
    Keep smiling!! :)

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  8. This was beautiful =) I'm adding this to my 'Fave Blogposts' folder =D

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